Expanded thesis proposal outline

I’ve just heard back from my Ed.D. supervisor regarding my expanded thesis proposal outline. Unfortunately, as I suppose I was expecting, it’s not focused enough. Now I’ve got to try and write another one before the end of the month! The problem is that I’m used to the broader (and shallower) practice of blogging, rather than the depth required for a thesis.

So at the moment I’m thinking that my new focus will be something along the lines of:

Does the nature and practice of schooling need to be modified to reflect the changing nature of knowledge in the 21st century?

(obviously this needs to be refined and focused as well, but it’s a start…)